What's an Apple?
by Lil Wel
An apple is a very important part of nature. It has a red brick shaped into a heart put into mother nature look. It has a juicy taste like when mother nature drinks her juicy orange juice. It has a soapy smell like when mother nature washes her hands with soap and water. It has a crunchy sound like when lumber jacks cut down the poor trees and makes mother nature sad. Last it has a smooth touch like mother nature's ripe berries we eat on warm, sunny days. See, an apple is a very important part of nature. Thank you for listening.
This was a small report that Wel did at school. I just loved it. :) He got a 98 (-2 because he forgot to underline his adjectives) and he's very proud of it. Just thought I'd share.

1 comment:
Wow! Is he bloggin yet? That was very good!!
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